tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8724621012366447587.post7960805271907202853..comments2023-10-05T05:50:24.143-05:00Comments on ..... Christian Poet's Pen: Reveal in Me, O Lord... Secret SinKathrynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12184992785911535419noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8724621012366447587.post-48844150790581918612009-10-07T12:06:04.802-05:002009-10-07T12:06:04.802-05:00Nice to see we have some new writers jumping in!Nice to see we have some new writers jumping in!Kathrynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12184992785911535419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8724621012366447587.post-30889247283878773652009-10-06T22:39:35.917-05:002009-10-06T22:39:35.917-05:00Mike Bullock, love your poems!!!! Right to the po...Mike Bullock, love your poems!!!! Right to the point and soooo expressive! Especially appreciated "MIRE". Please keep on writing. Like you, I have just posted some writing under "Comments" in the last few days and would appreciate some review. I hope I am able to become a regular contributor.<br /><br />I really like your writing!!!!!<br /><br />Carol PenhorwoodCarol Penhorwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09726803649608730175noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8724621012366447587.post-46988547043840797202009-09-27T20:28:15.475-05:002009-09-27T20:28:15.475-05:00thanks kara.. Sometimes, my heart can't verbal...thanks kara.. Sometimes, my heart can't verbally express what I want to tell the Lord, so it usually comes out in my poetry.. seems easier sometimes ya know?<br />Hope it has blessed you in some way..<br />karenkarenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17666861136164521960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8724621012366447587.post-32086556574596119612009-09-27T14:36:49.432-05:002009-09-27T14:36:49.432-05:00Hey Karen! Nice poem. I love how your poetry reads...Hey Karen! Nice poem. I love how your poetry reads like a prayer. It reminds me of Psalms.Kara Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06523938228532299644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8724621012366447587.post-4000839162636862432009-09-24T22:41:41.617-05:002009-09-24T22:41:41.617-05:00SOFT SCOOP
I'm wrestling with the ice cre...SOFT SCOOP <br /><br /> I'm wrestling with the ice cream<br /> Inside this soft scoop box<br /> My spoon is bent,my patience spent<br /> I'm trying to outfox<br /> The barrier before me<br /> To get my just dessert<br /> I'll hack at that unyielding mass<br /> No matter what the hurt.<br /><br /> But hey,where is my patience<br /> Why don't I let it melt<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com